LearniOSCoding.com

1. I didn’t like that “Part Time” was at the same level as “Learn building iOS Apps”. Part time is generally a secondary feature while learning X is a primary feature so I reduced its importance by adding an ellipsis (…) and changing the case to “…part time”
2. In the headline, I wanted to get to the fun part of learning coding i.e. to program. This is why the headline has been changed to “Program iOS Apps”
3. I’m a BIG fan of naming technologies for the sake of clarity. This is why I have named Objective-C and Swift in the subheading. Naming things reassures your site visitors that you know what you are talking about.
4. I also don’t think “on the side” needs to be repeated since you’ve already told the reader that your course is “Part Time”

If you like this feedback and act on it, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look”