Founder @ https://www.2ndlook.xyz. Ex-Goldman. Recovering Techie. Former New Yorker. Indian. Strategist. Word lover. Email: hello@sairamachandr.in
Oxalis
Sorry to say but the original SUCKS.
- A Trusted Partner — For what? A game of backgammon? Bank robbery? Hitchhiking? Replaced that with “A trusted technology partner”.
2. I don’t want to read about your lovely history of dealing with nincompoops in the industry. Just tell me what you can do for me. Hence — “Manage your technology footprint better with Oxalis. Leverage our deep experience and industrywide partnerships”. Crisp and to the point.
Sorry Oxalis. I had to be nasty with you.
