Pacafood

1. I found “Complete Meals.” very jarring and abrupt especially with the period.— like I was supposed to know something but I didn’t. My first thought was whether the same single meal in the Paca bag would cover breakfast, lunch, AND dinner? I didn’t fully understand what exactly the bag contained until I read the “Rethink Food” section.
2. I updated the headling to “One Bag. Three Meals.” to help people like me understand that it wasn’t one giant blob of food I’d be eating all day. Instead, it was three separate meals.
3. The original subheading didn’t mention anything about health and calories. I may be too busy or lazy to pick up food but I still want to know that Paca is a healthy alternative. With this in mind, I changed the subheading to “Each meal (just 654 cal!) covers all major food groups, giving you healthy energy to focus on things that matter”

Hope this helps.