Founder @ https://www.2ndlook.xyz. Ex-Goldman. Recovering Techie. Former New Yorker. Indian. Strategist. Word lover. Email: hello@sairamachandr.in
Swapcard
- The real attraction of a product like Swapcard is that it makes attendees addicted to the event in question. They want to come back to it because they enjoyed their first visit so much.
- To reflect this, I changed the headline to “Make your events …addictive” etc. You want organizers to know that Swapcards can convert one-time attendees into repeat customers. The rest of the copy is great as-is.
If you like this feedback and act on it, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look"
