Voiciety

The original headline took too long to get to the point. So I merged the headline and the subheading as follows-

Headline — Discover the Best Alexa FlashBriefings and Skills

Sub — Curated, shared, and voted on by people just like you.

It is short and gets to your value statement immediately instead of burying it.

If you like this feedback, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look"