Founder @ https://www.2ndlook.xyz. Ex-Goldman. Recovering Techie. Former New Yorker. Indian. Strategist. Word lover. Email: hello@sairamachandr.in
Write.pub
Should I be using write.pub to design and deliver beautiful docs or should I be using it as a document snapshotter?
Your web copy reflects this confusion. The subheading talks about using write.pub as a time machine but the rest of the copy talks about the beautiful output.
- I threw away the “Time Machine..” reference because it was causing confusion (to me)
- I also moved most of the first para into the subheading because I believe that that is your value statement and it should stand out.
If you like this feedback and act on it, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look"
