5 New-Novel-Writer Mistakes to Avoid

Kimberly Shyu
Welcome to Writing!
3 min readJan 6, 2022

--

Photo by hannah grace on Unsplash

I recently picked up an old novel I wrote a couple years ago. It was my first. I knew it needed edits — I hired a developmental editor who told me so, and I had several beta readers provide feedback, but I shoved it under a rug and distracted myself by writing two other novels.

Each novel I wrote became easier, faster, leaner, more compelling. Each novel’s plot propelled more quickly with better developed characters.

And when I finally rolled up my sleeves to dig into the edits on that first novel, whoa. Just, whoa. That writing was… well, it needed a lot of work. This made me smile for two reasons:

  1. I realized I had grown substantially by writing my other two novels.
  2. I knew how to fix it.

I was used to business and technical writing, so I thought novels were supposed to be flowery. I thought I could be poetic and let any and all words swirl from my brain to the page. WRONG. Novel writing is arguably more challenging than business writing, for several reasons: you’re vying for people’s free time. People will only read it if they want to. And they will only want to if it’s captivating and entertaining.

--

--

Welcome to Writing!
Welcome to Writing!

Published in Welcome to Writing!

We help you get decent exposure to your stories!

Kimberly Shyu
Kimberly Shyu

Written by Kimberly Shyu

Tech Product Leader, creative writer, and published artist. Writes about personal growth, leadership, writing, and product development. www.kimshyu.com.

Responses (1)