Jan Cornall
Creative In Bhutan
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2 min readSep 18, 2016

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“Haiku” jottings from Bhutan.

When I lead writing journeys I don’t have much time to write, but like to keep a small notebook in my pocket for haiku-like jottings such as these made in Pobjikha Valley:

thunderclap at the pee stop

prayer flags

shudder

Mist rolls down Pobjikha Valley

in the guesthouse car park

guides in their gohs

tell road widening stories

mountain winds

bone-white and tall

flags for the dead

In the blue pine forest

we find:

1.old man’s beard

2.peace

A cone shaped hill

of cone shaped pines

I forgot to wear

my cone shaped hat

Wall builders in no hurry

move

one

slow

rock

at a time

Taking a break from cement mixing

the Indian worker taps his foot to a wild flutey tune

his friend throws rocks at crows

Another ferocious thunderclap

as if recalling a past insult

the valley changes mood

Rain comes

dampening

tomorrow’s trail

The Korean guests leave,

loudly

Clouds hang around the mountain tops

smothering the blue pines

in wet kisses

Crows on a shingle roof

caw in unison

below,

a black dog sniffs the air

Looking back

the stupa they circumambulated

so small

watching over potato fields

an Aladdin’s cave of buddhas, taras and flaming deities

At night her head hurts

her stomach aches, she wonders why she came

By day says

“she wouldn’t have missed it for quids”

To rest forever in this view….

A child monk in a dark corner

waits to offer holy water

his smile

A rainbow streaks across the valley

gone

The mountain ambulance — always busy

you can see its red light flashing

Babies in no hurry to arrive

may find themselves birthed

on a bump

Karma is with us today

its blue bus tarp,

the colour of

all pervading space

© Jan Cornall 2016

www.writersjourney.com.au

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Jan Cornall
Creative In Bhutan

Writer,traveler-leads international creativity retreats. Come write with me at www.writersjourney.com.au