How to Use Writing to Improve Your Thinking

Writing is like taking the stairs

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The other day I read an HBR article about a company executive who discovers that employees are using the office copier for personal reasons. He creates a memo to address it. And he goes through three levels of revisions:

• First, eliminate wordiness
• Then, get the tone right
• Finally, make the intent clear

This revision process is something we can apply to our thinking as well as our writing. Let’s look at the steps that the executive took to make his writing sharper.

The first draft of the memo concluded: “Such practice [using the office copier for personal reasons] is contrary to company policy and must cease and desist immediately… Accordingly, anyone in the future who is unable to control himself will have his employment terminated.”

Sounds like a robot wrote that. So he shortened it to: “Such practice is contrary to company policy and will result in dismissal.”

The tone sounds a bit scary, right? The executive realized that it sounded like a false threat. And he knew…