An Unexpected View

Sue Dockstader
Fiction Shorts
Published in
Feb 26, 2024

Today’s random word is industrial

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This is a Drabble- exactly 100 words. If you stay for 30 seconds it gets counted as read and makes the whole exercise worthwhile- thank you!

“Hang on,” she said to the back of his head as they rushed past the row of shabby houses. “I thought we were going somewhere romantic?”

He slowed his pace, reached for her hand, and smiled.

“Patience, my dear.”

He guided her down the alley and held back the brambles dangling from the open doorway. They picked their way through the decaying remains of the industrial building and stepped out onto the debris-strewn porch facing the ocean.

He tilted his head westwards.

“Romantic enough for you?”

She leaned in for a kiss, as the sun inched towards the horizon.

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Sue Dockstader
Sue Dockstader

Written by Sue Dockstader

Writer/editor/publisher. Long-distance parent searching for a meaningful life over sixty. Loves dogs, orchids, and her own opinion on almost anything.

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