FICTION | DRABBLE | RANDOM WORD CHALLENGE

Hill 1,000 in Korea Was a Shit Detail

Random Word Drabble Challenge Day 256 word is ‘loath,’ and must include the phrase ‘thunderous sounds filled’ 👇👇👇

Stephen Dalton
Fiction Shorts
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3 min readSep 12, 2024

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A Blackhawk helicopter sits down on Hill 1000 in Korea, as the blades swirl the snow.
Helicopter blades make me shiver — Created with Bing AI image creation tool.

A drabble is a work of fiction that is exactly 100 words, no more, no less.

We’re monitoring the retransmission radio on Hill 1000 in Wonju, Korea. FM radio’s planning radius is only 17 miles, so these sites are necessary to provide communications for all within the Forward Edge of the Battlefield Area (FEBA).

I cringe to hear the incoming helicopter. Its thunderous sounds filled the air and shook the tent. The kerosene stove barely warmed it, but we were loath to leave the warmth to brave the biting winds.

I’d been suffering from dysentery, and as I ran to the helicopter, my bowels let loose. Although it is warm now, there are no showers here.

Thanks to Nancy Oglesby and Fiction Shorts for the daily challenge.

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Stephen Dalton
Fiction Shorts

Stephen Dalton is a retired US Army First Sergeant with a degree in journalism from the University of Maryland. Top Writer in Investing, Business, & Bitcoin!