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The Rude Awakening

Angry birds rip into her dream.

Scarlet Ibis James 🦩
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2 min readJun 21, 2024

Today’s opening sentence prompt is *If that damned bird would just shut up* and includes the random word, *married.*

“rude awakening”, black and white graphic art, desktop background, desktop wallpaper, black white and grey, dynamic, negative space. Midjourney.
The author created this AI image with Midjourney. S.I. James owns copyright and provenance, per Midjourney ToS.

“If that damned bird would just shut up!” Maddy mumbled.

But a persistent, shrill chirping was ruining the tranquility.

Her eyebrows knotted, and she concentrated on deliberately drifting back to her lucid dream.

She was chatting with an old friend she hadn’t seen in years. Blue eyes. They were laughing at some inside jokes from high school. “Are you married?”

His question interrupted the good times just as…TWEET TWEET!

Maddy’s eyes fluttered open.

With an angry exhale, she slapped the snooze button on her bird-shaped alarm clock.

Rolling onto her back, she glanced at the unruffled space beside her.

© Scarlet Ibis James, 2024: All Rights Reserved.

This 100-word story, a drabble, was written in response to Nancy Oglesby’s challenge. Thank you!

Story Soundtrack:

While not directly about birds or dreams, the song explores the weight of loneliness and feeling insignificant. The lyrics, “Sometimes I feel so small, lost in the middle of it all,” might resonate with Maddy’s glance at the space beside her when she woke up.

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Scarlet Ibis James 🦩
Scarlet Ibis James 🦩

Written by Scarlet Ibis James 🦩

I am a writer, reader, essayist, published author and editor. https://www.scarletibisjames.com.

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