When Passion Meets Panic

Drabble 348 | Brakes

Nancy Oglesby
Fiction Shorts
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2 min readDec 13, 2024

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Today’s challenge is to base our 100-word story on the provided image (above) incorporating the word brakes.

“Y’all remember that S curve the tracks took back in the 80s, just down from the Svenson’s back pasture?

“Well, one night me n’ Becca Sorensen were parked near there, in my daddy’s two-tone Monte Carlo SS, seats flipped back… things startin’ ta get good.

“I hear a rustle and feel a little shimmy, and start thinkin’ ‘I am rockin’ Becca’s world,’ so I get serious… you know.

“Next, I sense we’re movin’, so I lift my head up, and sure enough, we’re headed down that big hill and pickin’ up speed.

“Screamin’ like a girl, I shout, ‘BRAKES!!!’”

Izzibella and I have been on a similar wavelength lately. Yesterday I wrote about Sojourner Truth, and Izzi wrote a story based on the story of Emmett Till. I love that she chose to focus our attention on the inhumanity.

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Nancy Oglesby
Nancy Oglesby

Written by Nancy Oglesby

I explore life and tell stories! Embracing the world of Drabbles. Publisher of Fiction Shorts, the Challenged, and Another Fucking Publication

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