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Anatomy of a Relapse

Blow by blow by blow

Marilyn Flower
First Line Fiction
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10 min readFeb 15, 2025

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After three rings, the phone was answered by a voice she never thought she’d hear again. “Melvin?”

“Yes, Gloria.” The words rolled off his tongue.

As desperate as she was to talk to her sponsor, curiosity got the better of her. “What are you doing at Shawna’s?”

After a long, suspicious pause, he said, “We’re a…a thing now.”

“Are you shitting me?” Gloria’s voice reached a new-to-her octave, stretching her vocal cords into the pain range.

“Not intentionally, no.” Melvin’s voice went flat. “I would never do that, Gloria. Especially not…to you.”

Yeah right. Gloria closed her eyes, praying for God to grant her the serenity not to wring his neck.

“Hello?” Melvin mumbled. “You still there.”

Gloria forced a loud sigh. “Yes. I’m here. Where’s Shawna?”

“She’s indisposed at the moment. But she’ll be right back.” Mevin purred again. “So what’s been going on? Do you miss me?”

“Hardly!” Steam poured from her ears, and through clenched teeth, Gloria spit out, “Tell Shawna to call me back when she’s not… indisposed.” She clicked off her phone and looked around her kitchen…

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First Line Fiction
First Line Fiction

Published in First Line Fiction

Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Marilyn Flower
Marilyn Flower

Written by Marilyn Flower

Writer, sacred fool, improviser, avid reader, novel forthcoming, soul collage facilitator, prayer warrior and did I say writer? https://linktr.ee/marilynflower

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