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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

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Bogles and Caves, Bairns & Staves

Arpad Nagy
First Line Fiction
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13 min readMar 11, 2025

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Seen in the fading light of dusk, three oversized scarecrows, seen more as shadowy apparitions with unnaturally long arms and legs, hollowed eyes of yellow straw, and pallid, grimacing expressions, skulk in the shadows of an oak tree forest at night. They look menacingly at a man descending into an opening in the forest floor. In the background, a pregnant mother embraces her two young daughters, all fraught with worry.
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Nicole stood at the patio doors, the ones in place of a wall from the social room, not the double patio doors adjacent to the flower room, and watched her husband talking with Sam. She knew something was very wrong; not the missing ponies-wrong, or the straw under the girls’ pillows-wrong; not even the knocking on the walls and roof-wrong — which she’d heard each night but hadn’t so much as opened her eyes to alarm Todd. Something was Todd-wrong.

She had witnessed the posture he wore now, standing in his dead potato field, talking with Sam only twice before: the day Natalie was born and the day his father died. Sunken shoulders. Head tilted to the left. His chin up. Questioningly.

She understood at once what it meant. Her husband didn’t know what to do.

If it could be called a superpower, Todd had it — self-assuredness. He never rushed. Panic wasn’t in his makeup. He didn’t act without knowing the outcome. While his high school classmates sprinted off to college or university, into a trade or military, or loafed around, all without a purpose, Todd began working to find out what he was supposed to do.

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First Line Fiction
First Line Fiction

Published in First Line Fiction

Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

2024 Shortlist Northwind Writing Award NF/Fiction. Owner-First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Sweary Mommy, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.