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Duncan’s Purse- A Lost Town with a Dark Secret. Part I.

9 min readMay 11, 2025

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A man stands at the edge of a town engulfed by dense forest. Below him, he sees an old trestle bridge with a gaping hole in the center. A wide, whitewater river flows beneath the bridge. Across the bridge, in the distance, a large, thickly forested mountain looms shrouded in mist.
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In a town where nothing ever changed, his was the first new face in years. Duncan’s Purse wasn’t always like this, of course. During the early to mid-1900s, it bustled with prospectors, miners, lumbermen, and trappers, but after the hills ran dry of silver veins and mountain creeks carried no more gold and the caribou migrated further northwest and the wolves followed, and bridges across Red Witch River washed out with every spring melt, the town became too much work for too little coin.

No one could understand why the townsfolk remained.

The long-timers, offspring of the original pioneer families, kept to themselves, looked out for one another and viewed any new face as suspicious and bearing ill intent. They were not a welcoming bunch. Most curious travellers stumbling into Duncan’s Purse were quick to become passers-through, with the locals coming out of buildings and woods alongside the only road in and out, standing, watching but turning their backs when a new face stopped with a warm word.

Naturalists, tree planters, tree huggers, hippies, hobos, the disowned, displaced, and deplorables occasionally meandered into Duncan’s Purse seeking refuge and charity, but there was nothing to freeload and no…

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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

2024 Shortlist Northwind Writing Award NF/Fiction. Owner-First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Sweary Mommy, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.