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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

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Duncan’s Purse — Return to Hallow Trail

10 min readJun 11, 2025

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A bearded man in his 40s wearing a camping backpack stands amongst a dense, eerie forest. He stares at a line of pine trees with photo placards of missing persons. The mood is threatening, suspenseful and mysterious.
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Duncan's Purse. A First Line Fiction Serial Story.

7 stories
A pyramid-shaped, blue-tinged, forested mountain looms mysteriously ahead of two men, wearing backpacks, who look at one another skeptically and with trepidation as they march into the unknown dangers that lie ahead.
On a steep forested slope, a haggard-looking man in his 50s clasps a younger, bearded man against him, saving him from falling over a cliff. Behind them is the rotting carcass of a grizzly bear.
An intensely dense boreal forest falls into twilight. A trio of two men and a woman, scared for their lives, bolt from camp, running into the dark forest, away from something unseen but sinister and powerful, snapping trees as it crashes through the forest behind them. Owls and bats flee the forest in fear. The mood is tense and terrifying.

Part IV

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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

2024 Shortlist Northwind Writing Award NF/Fiction. Owner-First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Sweary Mommy, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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