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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Duncan’s Purse — Witness

A First Line Fiction Story — Prompt#30: Part XV

10 min readSep 22, 2025

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We are seeing the inside of a large, mountain cave. It is dome-shaped and covered in gold from ceiling to floor. The walls are looking tracery, divided into sections by stone mullions, forming trefoils and quatrefoils. Inside each trefoil and quatrefoil pod are human figures of all ages. The high, sloping walls form lancets at the top where they meet the ceiling and a bright but hazy yellow light filters in. In front of the humans contained within the pod stands a man.
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19 stories
Under a nearly full moon, a throng of men rushes down a forested mountain, heading towards a mountain with a yawning, open entrance to a cavern. A short, stocky, and strong woman stands armed with a bow and arrow among a line of blue-skinned, tall humanoids at the mountain entrance, each with bows, battleaxes, swords, and shields, prepared to fend off the attackers.
A man in his 50s, wearing a short beard and looking rugged and worse for wear, sits on his heels inside a mountain tunnel. In front of him are a dozen gold-skinned people, including his wife and two teenage sons. They are flanked by much taller, blue-skinned humanoids holding golden trumpets. Everyone is looking at an arch of crystal, glowing with white light, on the tunnel’s wall
A split image. The first image shows a man walking alongside a much taller, blue-skinned humanoid. They are entering a narrow tunnel, carved from rock inside a mountain. A white-blue mist surrounds them. The second image shows a haggard, bearded man in his 50s walking behind a stocky woman as she leads them into a tunnel with a golden light at the end.

Part XV

Jarod had never seen anything more terrifying, confusing and beautiful. Moving in a serene cadence, and separating into columns, were men, women and children of all ages. They looked straight ahead with hands steepled at their breast plates. Aside from the thin veils of fabric covering them from shoulders to knees, they were nude and their skin, from head to toe, was gold.

He stared at them as they silently marched past, and a sickness arrived in his stomach. They didn’t look normal.

The adult’s faces, hands and joints were plump with adolescent fat. The men and women, who should have looked aged, were without crows’ feet at the eyes and absent the smile line creases at their mouths. The skin beneath the chin was tight, and their necks were without creases. Shoulders and arms looked supple and smooth. None had mottled hands or calves scarred with bulging blue veins.

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First Line Fiction
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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

2024 Shortlist Northwind Writing Award NF/Fiction. Owner-First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Sweary Mommy, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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