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Arpad Nagy
First Line Fiction
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3 min readAug 1, 2024

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Sending Love Away

A woman gives her heart and soul to a love destined to leave her behind

Shivering on the frosty bench, she pulled her thin coat tighter against the icy wind, her bare hands red and raw.

Not so long ago, the air was sweet, her hands were as soft as satin, her nails were perfectly manicured, and she had burned so hot from the inside that the sun cooled her down. In the summer, she felt beautiful and proud to be seen with them, going to carnivals, parades, fairs, races and rodeos.

How had I let this happen again?

Orange, yellow, and red maple leaves kicked up from the brittle, brown grass and barrel-rolled, a sideways tornado, tumbling down the slope until it hit the rocks and scattered, landing on the pond soft as a kiss. She watched the mist dancing over the still water, summer’s last breath whispering its goodbye.

The snow will come, slow and sleepy, laying a blanket across the lawn, and I’ll be sitting

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First Line Fiction
First Line Fiction

Published in First Line Fiction

Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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