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Red Light, Black Light

First Line Fiction Prompt# 25

Arpad Nagy
First Line Fiction
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9 min readJan 27, 2025

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We see a married couple in their thirties, with the wife, an East Indian, leaning into her husband, a tall, blonde, Swedish man with his arm around her. They are looking at their 9-year-old daughter, playing with her school friends. Clouds of colorful auras surround all the children, the plants, and the trees.
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She’d always known there was something different about her, but today she finally understood why. As she coddled the sobbing girl, Charita wondered if she would ever forget her daughter’s face as she hauntingly repeated, “Black light! Red light! Black light! Red light!”

Wrapped beneath one arm, Charita cushioned the rescued girl’s cries and tears with her bosom. In her other hand, she clamped firmly to Devika’s clammy palm.

Three men, random shoppers, and a mall security guard held another man against the glossy gold and grey tile floor. Turning to the sound of heavy slapping footfalls rushing toward the scrum, Charita allowed a calming breath, her first since the terrible ordeal began. Three uniformed policemen descended into the huddle of citizen arrestors and the sicko lowlife who’d nearly succeeded in abducting the traumatized little bird she now held under her wing.

Nearly abducted. The words stood in her mind’s eye like a stop sign: A giant, red stop sign. If Devika hadn’t sounded the alarm and if she hadn’t understood her daughter’s message, the girl would be gone. The thought of what that animal might have done made her shudder and shook loose the tears she’d barely kept at bay.

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Each week, I will give you a new sentence — the first sentence for you to write a piece of short fiction. From drabbles to several-minute reads — let your imagination take you where it will!

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

2024 Shortlist Northwind Writing Award NF/Fiction. Owner-First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Sweary Mommy, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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