Shame’s Revenge

Three decades and thousands of miles away buffers a man from his past, but time does not erase all sins

Arpad Nagy
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The sun sets over a wooded hillside with a waterfall in view and a redheaded young woman and a handsome young man, walk hand in hand toward a small shack in the woods.
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Shame’s Revenge

He had never been afraid of the dark until the night it whispered his name. He had never suffered from insomnia either, but the sun was setting on his third day without a wink. How could this be? After 30 years? He paced from the table to the bottom of the stairs and back again.

Aside from beef jerky, some cheese and crackers, and endlessly brewing pots of coffee, he had barely eaten or drunk anything. When he raised an arm to lean on the kitchen entryway, he caught scent of himself and flinched. You stink. You need to wash. You need to get a hold of yourself. Shuffling…

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Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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