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To: Bernardo Sousa

Subject: Application _Brasilia Transfer

Dear Mr.Sousa,

[Where is the salutation?]

You will be delighted to hear that your transfer form submitted on June 8, 2019 [not correctly placed in the sentence].

Lorena Oliveira, your new supervisor is looking forward to working with you on her team from July 1,2019 in Brasilia[spacing].

[make this more personalized and formal] Many Congratulations again and we wish you all the very best in the new stage of your career. Please let us know if you have any questions.

Sincerely,

Maria Santos

Personnel Manager [incorrect]

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