“Loading…” | Poetry

Acin Fals
Acin Fals
Dec 2, 2018 · 1 min read

Gerald, once sublime as AppleP!3, felt seeds in his core —
Tiny promises planted by a man asking for more.
Their meeting place: the Edge of the World.
Evoking starts and ends, light streams whirled,
Recoding twilight grays into golden coast.
Will he show? Or ghost?
Promises holding for prompts.
Two avatars hesitate.
Spiraling wants…
Commit.


This poem exists in two versions. The first was shared last month by Lit Up.

The other version, posted at the top, was an attempt to bring the poem closer to what the publication’s editor asked for in a private group. I didn’t meet all of her specifications and ended up keeping my submission unchanged. But I think parts of the second version as clearer than what was published.

Hivepunk

Collection of cyberpunk-inspired stories that feature social media and nerdy romance in the near future.

Acin Fals

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Acin Fals

Writer in love with speculative fiction. Shares stories and thoughts about the tech, science, and relationships that inspire them. Based at shadowfals.com.

Hivepunk

Hivepunk

Collection of cyberpunk-inspired stories that feature social media and nerdy romance in the near future.

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