Breaking the screenplay

Julian Simpson
Cartoon Gravity
Published in
6 min readFeb 10, 2018

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I wrote this post for my blog a while back (2016) and then it was published in The Author. But I was re-reading it today and thought it worth posting here. There’s an update at the bottom.

Imagine you’re a development person. You have a pile of scripts on your desk and you have to wade through them. They’re all about the right length, they’re all nicely bound and they’re all formatted correctly because, if you expect nothing else from a professional writer, you at least expect them to be able to observe the simple rules of formatting. So you take the top one off the pile and you open it up and page one is a lot of white space and the text is in Courier Final Draft, or Courier Prime if the writer is fancy. And the two words at the top: “FADE IN” and then a line or two of white and then it says “INT. A ROOM — DAY” or “EXT. FARMHOUSE — EVENING” or “EXT. A CITY STREET — NIGHT”. And then there’s a couple of lines of description because the writer has read her Mamet and her Goldman and she knows that she’s not supposed to put anything there that can’t be filmed. This isn’t literature, this is a blueprint for a movie or a TV show and it’s nice if you can pretty up the language a bit but for the love of God only write that which can be seen on the screen or heard through the speakers. So that is what she has done, and then a character speaks and… And now you pick another script off the pile and it’s the same. And the next. And the…

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Julian Simpson
Cartoon Gravity

London-based writer/director working in TV, film and radio.