It’s Time

The picture is the prompt. Nice review: Wow! Just, wow! You definitely know what you’re doing! You said so much in this one page. I love the imagery in certain lines (tented fingers! I could actually see that:D), and how you are careful to explain something as simple as the chair. It said a lot about your character — not being ostentatious. A talented writer remembers to ‘spice’ up the lines with a quick descriptive detour every now and then, and you certainly delivered.

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