Memories

Nice review: What a sweet start to romance. Your story is concise and easy for anyone to understand. I liked all the imagery you included. You named the diner plus revealed the location. That creates a mood and makes it feel very real. I loved the choice of music too. You can’t go wrong with Elvis songs, for sure, but the ones she selected also brought a sense of romance. The ease of interaction between these two people showed that they truly were in sync. I’m quite fond of dialogue and yours has plenty, yet isn’t overdone. Those quick, short responses are really working.

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