E.E. Cummings’ Poem Ripped by His Feedback Partner, F.F.

“i carry your heart with me” doesn’t cut it with collaborator

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e.e.:

So far I’ve just got this first verse. Let me know if you’re feeling it:

i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go,my dear;and whatever is done
by only me…