Thesis Midterm Review
Panelists: Ashely, Marc, Matt / Francis
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1 min readDec 16, 2018
Feedback from Panelists
- I should start with an overarching story to make my point rather than digging into the thought process.
- Define the term “Food Literacy”
- If I try to use a social lens, I should look for people and relationships. In the DSI, we talk about change for readiness.
- The problem statement contradicts to my artifact reviews.
Written feedback
- It seems that knowledge and skill do not lead to high impact.
- I should have more personal research (interview, …etc)
- International students are a good example of “Change-ready”.
- Next step is not good enough.
- One single statement of possibility and really make a difference.
- Make defensible decisions in the work then step forward.
- Behavior and motivation of the target audience.
- How can I keep the work social rather than an individual?
- Next step, take a step back and think.
Feedback from Francis
- Sustainability + Game + Food is a novel idea
- FoodMood is a book I should read
- Check kitchen program here: http://chopwoktalk.com/
