Marauding Mare

Kittie Phoenix
Kittie Phoenix, the Next Edition
1 min readOct 28, 2017
Image courtesy of Pixabay, with sad attempts at simplified Han by me

She flies through the ether,
Power and majesty in every sinew.
Creative winds blow through the starry skies.
You can’t bridle her; you can’t tame her.
She chafes against a bit,
And you’ll lose fingers trying to place it anyway.
She’s uncontrollable strength
With a discipline known only in her wild heart.
You’ll never control her;
Her hooves stomp out every ill placed boundary.
Your only hope, your sole chance of success,
Is to run wild with her.
Feel the wind whipping over her;
Keep pace shoulder to shoulder;
Correct with only a gentle poke in the withers,
Or a nip to an ear.
Some things are too wild;
It’s best to let them roam free, boy.
You can’t own wild hearts;
You can’t break wild hearts;
You can’t ride wild hearts;
It’s best to let them roam free.

Author’s Note: Long ago, I took some Chinese lessons. One of the side studies I did involved contemporary music; one song had the phrase “ tiān mǎ xíng kōng.” The literal translation was something along the lines of “heavenly steed across a starry sky.” Figuratively, it spoke of wild creativity, powerful and unbounded. Naturally, the idea stuck with me long after my studies ceased.

--

--

Kittie Phoenix
Kittie Phoenix

Written by Kittie Phoenix

Teacher | Writer | Parent | Spouse | Thinker | Dreamer | Wanderer | Mischief Explorer | Country Mouse (more tags to follow over time)