Drafting the Declaration of Independence

What was cut, what was kept, and why

Lauren
Lessons from History

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Painting by Jean Leon Gerome Ferris

On the evening of July 4, 1776, the final draft of the Declaration of Independence was signed by the members of the Continental Congress in Philadelphia. The famed introduction stated,

“We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal; that they are endowed by their Creator with certain inalienable rights that among these are life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness.”

These moving words would spur a revolution in America. However, not many people know that the final draft of the Declaration did not include phrases and entire paragraphs that its author, Thomas Jefferson, intended for the document.

Men such as John Adams and Benjamin Franklin made significant changes, omitted words, and added their own opinions. The modifications to the nation’s Declaration of Independence ensured that democracy was not crafted by one man — but by the collective.

Portrait of Thomas Jefferson, by Rembrandt Peale, 1800

Thomas Jefferson: The Author

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Lauren
Lessons from History

Public historian • Writer • Passion for telling contested histories • she/her