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The critique that convinced me to quit writing

…and how I am finding my way back

Danielle Boccelli
Mar 9 · 10 min read

Henry was mystified by my new pages. Was it more than brocade, he asked, more than beautiful language?… Then he said, as everybody else has said, “Well, you should give a clue, you should lead up to it; we are thrown into the strangeness unexpectedly. This must be read a hundred times.”