Cole Hardman
Lit Up
Published in
4 min readAug 20, 2023

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EXT. THE SHARP HOUSE — AFTERNOON

Leo, Rich, and Mr. Kidderman walk out the front door. Mr. Kidderman closes the door before jogging ahead to catch Rich in the driveway. Leo, looking suddenly left out, slouches away and jumps into the back Mr. Kidderman’s van.

MR. KIDDERMAN
(turning seriously toward
Rich after Leo shuts the
van door)

Look here, son, I want to say I won’t report you.

RICH
(trying for laugh)

It’s good to know you’re not a snitch.

Mr. Kidderman glances back at Leo, who is playing with something on the front panel of the car radio.

MR. KIDDERMAN

Not any of you.

RICH

And so…?

MR. KIDDERMAN

So Shelly needs you

more than ever now.

Rich makes an attempt at surprise that morphs into something like braggadocio.

MR. KIDDERMAN

Don’t think I don’t know

that you and her —

RICH

Yep?

MR. KIDDERMAN
(laughing, breaking his
serious barrier)

— favor one another.

Mr. Kidderman slaps Rich on the shoulder, steering him towards the van.

CUT TO:

INT. SHELLY’S ROOM — EVENING

Leo’s computer, supplanted from Dirk’s room, sits haphazardly on Shelly’s desk. Hannah sits in front of the screen, typing away, reading something small that only she can see printed on the quivering electrons. Shelly lounges on her bed. Anxiously, she fiddles with a perfume bottle and puffs a cloud of what you might imagine to be syrupy sweet scents up towards the slow-spinning fan, which tears the haze to shreds.

HANNAH
(absently, without turning
around towards Shelly)

Please stop. You know I hate perfume.

The sound of a car engine suddenly rumbles up the drive. A garage door fumbles open, shaking the house awake, and Shelly jumps up. She hurries out the room and down the stairs. Hannah stops what she is doing. She listens to Shelly thud quickly down each step.

The front door creaks open downstairs, and Hannah flinches. Boots thud on the entryway, and someone below expresses their surprise.

SHELLY
(oversweetly flavoring her
double-minded lie)

Hey there,

I think that Hannah’s staying here for dinner,

if that’s OK. She says that she doesn’t want

to go home yet.

OFFICER SHARP

So Hannah’s here — ?

BETTY
(cutting her husband short)

That’s fine —

Hannah’s always welcome here, you know.

Hannah relaxes. There’s some shuffling in the rooms below, and she goes back to typing when Shelly starts stomping back up the stairs.

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INT. THE SHARP DINING ROOM — EVENING

Shelly, Hannah, Betty, and Officer Sharp are gathered around a dinner table that feels conspicuously empty despite their presence. Officer Sharp sits turned half way from the table so that he can see the TV in the living room, which is tuned to the local news. He picks at his food while he watches a LOCAL REPORTER intently.

LOCAL REPORTER

…and now, we turn again to the news that’s made

so many waves since it broke a month ago.

The other day we aired a hometown story

about a boy named Rich who built a site

to protest all the data abuses that

became apparent after the Hereafter hack.

And now, tonight, we can report that the

investigators tasked with digging up

the culprits of the hack have filed their report,

which speculates that a trojan afterversion

was used in the attack, but names no suspects…

OFFICER SHARP
(performatively to himself)

If I could only get at that computer,

I’d tell the feds exactly where the perp

buys their coffee in the morning.

Officer Sharp turns to Shelly, and then glances at Hannah. Both of them look mortified.

OFFICER SHARP (CONT’D)

I’ll say

one thing: your buddy Rich should watch his back.

Companies like that have got a dozen

different ways to make a mess of a guy

that pokes them with a stick.

Hannah manages half an unsure laugh. Betty, coming to the rescue, grabs a spoon.

BETTY
(to Hannah)

Mashed potatoes?

HANNAH

Yes, please.

Betty shovels a pile of mashed potatoes from a bowl and dumps them on Hannah’s plate.

HANNAH (CONT’D)

Thanks there, Betty.

Hannah takes a bite of the potatoes. Only Shelly seems to notice the slight shake in her fork. As Hannah chews, though, her face softens and her hand settles. She glances first at Shelly, and then at Officer Sharp.

HANNAH (CONT’D)
(choking down the food)

How was the FOP

party thing?

Officer Sharp starts and spins back from the TV.

OFFICER SHARP

What party thing?

SHELLY
(suddenly desperate to
smooth things over)

You know,

the fundraiser ball…?

OFFICER SHARP

That was several months ago.

An awkward silence, only kept at bay by the clinking of Betty’s practiced fork, takes hold. Officer Sharp senses his opportunity to detach and turns back to the TV, and Hannah shoots Shelly a knowing look before eating another mouthful of mashed potatoes.

CUT TO:

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Cole Hardman
Lit Up
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I’m an engineer with a passion for poetry and literary theory.