Cole Hardman
Lit Up
Published in
3 min readOct 4, 2019

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INT. DIRK’S CAR, HIGHWAY 37 — AFTERNOON

Dirk is driving Shelly and Leo back to Mitchell. His phone is in the cupholder. Flori floats teasing in the screen. Everyone else is deep in thought.

FLORI (IN PHONE)
(watching Dirk)

So, where do we go from here?

DIRK

We need

to build a local network, something secure,

some place off the maps where you can work

on building software to destroy the killer

afterversion of Hannah’s dad. I’d code

it up myself, with you telling me what to type,

but that would take forever and a day.

And then we have to find a way to deliver

the software to Hereafter’s servers…

FLORI (IN PHONE)

Right!

But don’t get too far ahead. We’ll cross

that bridge to deliverance when we get there.

SHELLY
(pepping up)

Why can’t we work at home? Dirk’s still got the

computer that he got at school, and isn’t it

made for something just like this?

LEO
(pushing the envelope)

And then

the Officer could make us dinner! I’ve seen

how much he cooks — you guys could use an extra

mouth or two at the table.

Dirk turns to look at Leo, swerving a bit into the other lane before Shelly grabs the wheel.

SHELLY

Dirk…

Dirk swivels back towards the road and straightens his car.

DIRK

I planned

on using my computer — maybe one more

if I can buy a desktop later. But we

can’t work on our connected networks at home.

It would only take one slip, one instant

when someone doesn’t remember to disable

the wireless on their computer, and then

bam! Hereafter would delete Flori

quicker than we could download her onto

a safe computer. Not to mention what

the officer would say if he found out

what we were doing…

SHELLY

It’s worth it if it means

that Hannah would be safe.

Shelly glances down at Flori, pleading silently for help in convincing Dirk to take the risk.

SHELLY (CONT’D)

And I don’t know

anywhere to go but home…

FLORI (IN PHONE)

I’m fine

with that, if it’s what it takes.

DIRK
(somewhat irrationally
dismissive)

But it won’t work.

We need to find a place that’s safe, with power…

a landline…somewhere that, even if they

happen to catch a whiff of someone working

on destructive versions of their own software,

the engineers at Neverland couldn’t find us,

stop us, or delete us from the app.

Dirk swings his car to the right, down a ramp wedged between walls of dripping limestone that leads out of Bedford. The road settles across a bridge spanning a wide valley, where The White River, flooded by the last late-summer thunderstorms, spreads itself out across half-ripe cornfields.

LEO
(suddenly excited)

What about the Treehouse?

SHELLY
(turning to Dirk)

That could work.

DIRK

Did it have power?

LEO

Yeah! Remember when

we spent a whole July trying to beat

Ghost and Goblins?

DIRK

It was so hot up there…

LEO

We even had that little fridge that my dad

was going to throw out.

FLORI (IN PHONE)
(confused)

What’s the Treehouse?

SHELLY

And we could see the town from there — no one

would even know that we were watching them.

LEO

I wonder if that stuff’s still there? I think

we saved the TV, but I don’t remember…

DIRK

Let’s try it, then.

FLORI (IN PHONE)
(bouncing around the
screen, trying to get
attention)

Hey! Will someone fill me in?

CUT TO:

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Cole Hardman
Lit Up
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I’m an engineer with a passion for poetry and literary theory.