The Test — Part 1: Initial Draft
A short story written, revised, and completed before your very eyes.
Sep 4, 2018 · 12 min read
Since my experiment with writing my short story “Zoe” as you watched proved so successful, I’ll have another go at it. The following is a first draft, with comments included. In a separate post, I’ll revise the story with comments about my revisions, and then I’ll post the final version.


