In the first two installments, I presented the first draft and a revised draft, both with comments. Here now is the completed story. A few additional edits were made, but I won’t comment on them. Just enjoy!
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Welcome to Lit Up -The Land of Little Tales. Here you can read and submit short stories, flash fiction, poetry - in brief, your own legend. We're starting little. But that's how all big stories begin.