How I Approach Editing Your Story on Middle-Pause

With as much gentle encouragement as I can.

Marilyn Flower
Nov 19, 2020 · 6 min read

So here goes…

Every picture tells a story.

Do break up your story with subheads.

Paragraphing is a big concern on Medium.

After the formatting, I dive into the content.

Does the piece start with a personal story to hook readers in?

Last-Minute Caveats

Middle-Pause

For the woman in the middle.

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Writer, sacred fool, improviser, avid reader, writer, novel forthcoming, soul collage facilitator, prayer warrior and did I say writer?

Middle-Pause

Helping you to create an oasis in the middle of your crisis of managing work, family, relationships, parenting, menopause, and caregiving.

Marilyn Flower

Written by

Writer, sacred fool, improviser, avid reader, writer, novel forthcoming, soul collage facilitator, prayer warrior and did I say writer?

Middle-Pause

Helping you to create an oasis in the middle of your crisis of managing work, family, relationships, parenting, menopause, and caregiving.

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