COMIC ANALYSIS

Calculating Captions

The science of a funny gag line

David Milgrim
Jan 19 · 2 min read

I recently posted this gag panel:

I liked the set up, so I kept at it and ended up having my own caption contest. I posted it on FB and asked opinions there. This was the best choice from a handful of other caption contenders.

Here are the other finalists.

I started thinking that I ended up being this guy, trying to calculate the most effective solution for my drawing. which brought me to one final idea:

If you have a vote, or would like to add a new candidate, please do!

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David Milgrim

Written by

Top Writer in Psychology, Satire & Humor; Trying to Feel Okay, One Comic at a Time; Contact me at sitemail1000@gmail.com or www.milgy.com

MuddyUm

MuddyUm

Bootleg Humor Since 1720

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