Review of Chantal Chuba’s “What if Trump Wins?”

Thoroughness and comprehension: ➕

Stretching of creative muscles: ✔️

Using the right tools for the job: ✔️

Chantal Chuba, I really enjoyed the visual language placed in this piece. With that, I wanted more imagery to assist with the writing such as an image or visual to accompany this paragraph:

“I can’t help but imagine the worst-case scenario: Donald Trump as the President of the United States of America. My inner drama queen envisions a Nazi-like dystopia, complete with staggering Trump statues and a revamped version of the Pledge of Allegiance.”

Fire up Photoshop or find a movie screen-cap, this line is just asking for a visual pairing.

Another example, this line is beautiful and would have been pumped up with a screenshot of the Reddit thread to visualize the breadth of this conversation:

“There are 15,000 comments on that Reddit thread, but not one gives a real answer.”

I really felt the humanity and wonder in regards to your thoughts on this election. Well done.