At the end of the day, college didn’t teach me how to help others better. It rather taught me how to receive help from others. As cheesy and cliché it sounds, I learned that like anybody else in this world, I can’t do life by myself alone.
$5000 The Third: Response to “Fuck Off Fund”
Joanne Yj Kim
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Review of Joanne Yj Kim’s, “$5000 The Third: Response to ‘Fuck Off Fund’”
Thoroughness and Comprehension: (+)
A great example of well documented response to a piece of reading. Great referencing to the original post and crafting of a story.
Stretching of creative muscles: (+)
I loved all the personal touches of the story, including imagery that referenced the original post, and the large linking to your personal narrative. Well done!
Using the right tools for the job: (+)
Fantastic work using different kinds of pull quotes and drop caps to add some visual dynamism to the writing.