The home I imagine is warm, it’s filled with obnoxious conversations, and our wild, barefoot kids have scribbled all over the hot pink walls.
A Story of Queer Kissin’ and a “Fuck Them Fund”
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Review of KT Hawbaker-Krohn’s, “A Story of Queer Kissin’ and a ‘Fuck Them Fund’”
Thoroughness and Comprehension: (+)
Not only did I enjoy the creativity that went into this piece of storytelling but I appreciated the critical critique of the original author’s work during the reference while still making the connection to your personal story. Great title, great subhead, incredible metaphorical writing.
Stretching of creative muscles: (+)
This piece of writing has such a soul to it and I really enjoyed it. Your voice really shines with this narrative.
Using the right tools for the job: (+)
Again, great choice of imagery, with a mix of personal photography and pop-cultural references, which really shine in this type of writing. Well done.