Review of Nan Zhong’s “Debate: which one is less important when the economic issue come?Library, Public Transportation, Police”

Thoroughness and comprehension: ✔️

Stretching of creative muscles: ➕

Using the right tools for the job: ✔️

Nan Zhong, there’s a lot of great stuff here, including some hints of investigative reporting. I love it. With something so commanding as this, I would make sure your references are linked to such as the mentioned facts, statistics, and imagery.

I also have some structural suggestions. I would recommend having each break-down (Library, Public Transportation, Police) be included in their own section and sub-headline (the H2 option in Medium). Doing so will break up the writing to be more digestible.

Along with the structure, I would work on the headline, it’s a little clumsy. Here’s something I came up with:

“Libraries, Public Transportation, or Police. Choose one.”

How libraries can save thousands of Renminbi a year.

This is an incredibly ambitious piece with a lot of good bones, I would just work on tightening up some of the language and references. Hope to see more of this writing from you in the future. Nice work!