Review of Nan Zhong’s, “Part of the Story”

Thoroughness and Comprehension: (+)

This was such a beautiful essay and narrative. I loved the connections that were made throughout this piece. One piece of feedback is to go through your writing a little more with a proofreading eye. There are some spelling mistakes that, while they do not take away from the story, can distract it.

Stretching of creative muscles: (+)

The connection between Hannah and Hilary’s story and the poem was such a creative move. The storytelling is A+.

Using the right tools for the job: (+)

Great use of imagery, layout, and quote. Great job Nan!