Review of Ritika Gupta’s, “I-DO-GIVE-A-FUCK-FUND”

Thoroughness and Comprehension: (+)

While reading your response, I can tell that you critically read the original assignment and gathered the emotion of it, mainly because you successfully used the original context and changed it. Which leads me to…

Stretching of creative muscles: (+)

…the fact that I enjoyed your perspective of flipping the Fuck Off Fund into your own I-DO-GIVE-A-FUCK-FUND. Your explanations and storytelling brought me into the writing, and you did a phenomenal job of letting the reader step into your shoes (no pun intended), while ending with a life lesson and your own values. Fantastic job.

Using the right tools for the job: (✓)

While I enjoyed the imagery used throughout the piece, I would consider some work with the captions. Think about how the last caption reads.

“feeding these is more rewarding.”

While I am aware that you are referring to the bowls as “these”, it can easily come across as othering, or referring to the people in the photo as these.

“feeding them is more rewarding” is a better, more direct approach. When writing for the audience that is the internet, think about your lexicon and how words can be read differently among different audiences.