Review of Ritika Gupta’s, “WHY I DEVELOPED A DISLIKE FOR BEYONCÉ IN THE PAST FIVE DAYS”

Thoroughness and Comprehension: (✓)

This is such a fascinating article, especially because I was having the same conversation with a friend yesterday about this. While I enjoyed your analysis, it was a little hard for me to follow the critique. Linking to articles on particular instances (the accusations of misrepresentation, a news article example that surfaced the controversy) and references to bios of the people mentioned throughout the article (a wiki page of Sonam Kapoor, and a wiki page of Beyonce and Coldplay) would help a reader better follow along. While you and I know Beyonce and Coldplay, we should assume that there is someone reading this article that has no idea who Beyonce is or the attention this video garnered.

Stretching of creative muscles: (+)

That being said, this article was a delight to read! I enjoyed your critiques, including the jabs at stylistic choices and your suggestions. Also, great job posing a question at the end of the post. That really hooks into online readers mentality to continue to the conversation.

Using the right tools for the job: (+)

Writing about media commands a media heavy post, and you hit the marks with images (and video). Make sure, in the captions, to reference and give credit to the owner of the images.