Review of Yana Andriesh’s “Cultural Code of Dolce&Gabbana
Thoroughness and comprehension: ✔️
Stretching of creative muscles: ✔️
Using the right tools for the job: ➕
Yana Andriesh, your images are continually spot on for providing great visuals to accompany your stories, but what would have made this writing a + worth piece is a bit more detail brought into each example. There’s a lot of “what” in this writing, but I want more supporting details to answer the “why”. For example, I learned quite a lot in the beginning, and then when I was expecting to learn more about D&G’s history and values, it turned into a plain list. You did it well in the “…attached to their origins” section but the other bullet points fell a little flat.
More about the sections: think about ways to use the H2 more strategically to signify a chunking of sections among your bullet points. Here’s an example of what I mean below:
They are attached to their origins:
Sicily, the homeland of Domenico Dolce, has served a starting point for three ingenious and refined collections. In particular, they interpreted the Sicilian cart, ceramics, and cathedral mosaics. While Italy as the whole country lays in the foundation of the brand’s identification.
They carry out straight allusions from works of art:
From tops and shorts, the two manage to do it with a portion of wit a self-irony.
Aside from the structural and detail issues, your voice in this article is spectacular. The last paragraph is the best section in this work.
“Whether it is family values, gold and black splendid baroque, or islands of South Italy that inspire Dolce and Gabbana, their works seem magnificent and unattainably beautiful. Their initials imply more than a fashion house — Dolce&Gabbana is embedded in Italian culture and helps to spread the sense of dolce vita around the world.”
I enjoyed learning a bit more about a company I thought I knew a lot about, thanks for writing!
