Dear New Writer, Break Up Your Paragraphs For Me, Pretty Please

You could be losing your readers already from the first paragraph

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As soon as I click on an article, I immediately have a good indication if someone is a newer writer on Medium or a seasoned writer.

Can you guess what it is?

The length of their first…



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Megan Llorente

Megan Llorente

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