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The Keen Stars Were Twinkling

From mediocrity to greatness: my tribute to Percy Bysshe Shelley in accordance with Oscar Wilde’s proclamation

Carolyn Hastings
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3 min readNov 3, 2024

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A black background studded with twinkling stars and tiny golden hearts and the words, ‘The keen stars were twinkling’ in a cursive font in the centre.
constructed by author in Canva using image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery that mediocrity can pay to greatness. Oscar Wilde

Let me set this straight from the outset — I’m the ‘mediocrity’ factor in this endeavour; I make no claim to greatness! 😜

But I do acknowledge that, when it comes to poets, there have been many before me who have proudly carried the mantle of ‘greatness’. Oscar Wilde himself was one of them. So too was Percy Bysshe Shelley.

It is the latter, the esteemed Mr Shelley, that I attempt to flatter with the utmost sincerity. And as Oscar Wilde proclaims, the best way to do that is by imitation.

I’ve chosen the opening stanza of the romantically star-struck poem, To Jane: The Keen Stars Were Twinkling, that Percy Bysshe Shelley penned for his illicit love interest, Jane Williams, in 1822 just months before his untimely death —

The keen stars were twinkling,
And the fair moon was rising among them,
Dear Jane.
The guitar was tinkling,
But the notes were not sweet till you sung them
Again.

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Carolyn Hastings
Carolyn Hastings

Written by Carolyn Hastings

Well-practiced speech pathologist now practicing to be a children’s book writer — emphasis on practicing.