#MakeoverMonday2018 — Week 45
Original Viz
What I like from this viz:
- The line chart is clear and catch the eye.
- The label and color choice clearly separate the two age groups.
- The title is captivating, along with interesting stick figures to show the growth in population
What I don’t like:
- The column charts seem to add no value, the line chart itself is sufficient to deliver the message which is clearly defined in the title.
- The use of column charts on the time series axis does not make the best visual effect because the audiences look at three separate dual columns, not a continuous time series analysis.
For my revision, I want to send a different message from the original viz. In particular, I want to compare the black and Asian American population, those are more prominent in terms of community size, to those lesser in population size, which are Native American & Alaska Natives and Native Hawaiian & Pacific Islanders.
In my viz, you can see:
- The four minorities communities in the U.S. are separated from each other by a thin line and colors.
- The overall comparison of the total population over time based on the dot plot
- The projected number of population growth (see pic below)