Seen a BAD job ad on Indeed? Me, too. But this one was a masterclass in copywriting.

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“Please leave…”
2 min readJun 27, 2024

Don’t worry about it being German, explanation coming up:

“Crappy job” ad on Indeed

The ad:

Awesome crappy job in the evening hours, approx. 17:00–21:00

…in Sebi’s Little World!

It might just be a chill, well-paid gig. Cruise around Berlin and Brandenburg evenings, jamming to my quirky voice messages.

Work from 5 to 9 or 10 pm, Monday to Saturday.

You don’t need muscles, but don’t be a couch potato.

If you’re reliable, punctual, friendly, and a safe driver, get in touch. Join my team.

If you’re reliable, punctual, friendly, and a safe driver, get in touch. Join my scatterbrained but adorable team.

Cheers from,

Sebi

Why was it brilliant?

  1. Punchy headline tackled objections
  2. Personal, relatable storytelling
  3. Humor shifted beliefs
  4. Straight-up honesty
  5. Warm, friendly sign-off

This ad was marketing gold. It pointed out the bad and flipped expectations.

It was honest, friendly, and made you want in.

I analyzed it further the next day–line by line.

Joke Time:

Why did the toilet paper apply for the “crappy job”?

Because it knew how to handle all the… you-know-what!

Onward,

Alexander “loved a clever ad” Kluge

P.S. You wanted to spice up your own ads, hit reply, and BOOM… it was *magic!*

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