Commuter sonnet

I walk,
Through the tumult, traffic and metro-cars,
In the city of light bulbs instead of stars
Of a lost folk.
Black metal stalks.
And in the way he talks,
He’s found confidence in that crowd
Swarming around.
And she smiles wide
As he’s giving his seat
Away to her; decides
That she’s pretty indeed.
Heavy feet of them flap with a flop
As the train comes to a stop.